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Ren Amamiya 🃏 JOKER ([personal profile] tookyourheart) wrote in [community profile] candybox2020-05-21 07:53 pm
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OPEN POST: Ren Amamiya (Joker) - Persona 5


henlo friends it's that time again, toss in a prompt/starter/idea so we can thread

I've played and completed Royal, but I would prefer to remain unspoiled for Scramble!
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[personal profile] lapapesse 2020-06-04 10:44 pm (UTC)(link)
[Hm, curious. Makoto sets a hand against her chin as she thinks it over. It's about as complicated as she thought it would be, and a bit different from what she remembers, but she likes a challenge.]

Well, 'the' is a definite article in English, so it would be 'the next' season, since it's a specific soccer season...

[So that answers the second one, and she works backward from there.] Which also preserves the tense of the sentence. So if we're preserving the tense across the entire sentence, I believe it should be 'would'. Also, it's not directly quoting the coach, so then it probably...

[She seems to second-guess herself a little, eyes narrowing. She's pretty sure she has it but - then the drinks arrive. A quick, easy order is delivered fast, at least.

The sudden presence of a waitress makes her jump a little, though, and turn, breaking her from the rather intensive concentration. English is definitely a difficult language, but maybe Makoto shouldn't get into her own head too much.
] Oh, sorry, thank you.

They've got a quite sticky sentence there for second-year curriculum.